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Not as bad as the ratings!

The melody is very catchy, just work on the mastering and the loudness so we can hear all of the instruments!
P.S. I'm actually looking forward to the song if you go with it but you should have named this sample track what you were going to name the actual track so it is easy to find.

ALRMD responds:

I have to agree on the loudness.
It's really because of quality issues. I did this in about... 30 minutes. Haha.
And, I don't see much problem with the mastering either. Mainly, it depends on your audio output. Like, with my laptop speakers, I can barely hear the bass drum and bass synth. Try using some nice in-ears or stereo speakers.
Anyway, thanks! I appreciate it!

Sweet!

I haven't really encountered this type of ambient music, it gives a really weird earth feel in the beginning then near the end the mood is kind of unexplainable.
1) The bass you used was amazing
2) Bells and Chimes were awesome additives
3) The subtle melody was cool too
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Overall, nice job on it!

NomadDemon responds:

its hard to find good genre to describe this music, its "soundtracks" but no genre on newgrounds :(

Voting 10 because

This brings back so many memories! Wonderful homage to the Dark Cloud Series!

Ixalon responds:

Thank you very much! I'm very glad that you liked this one! Thanks again for reviewing!

Two sides to it:

The bad side:
The cymbal is quite loud, it is a little distracting, although the kick and snare are really good.
Those sudden starts and stops in the beat should be accompanied with transitions so it doesn't feel so abrupt.
The quantization of the notes feels a little too offbeat, but it's growing on me!
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The good side:
It's beautifully mastered!
Don't let that go to waste!

TheBlackAssasin responds:

thanks for the tips and i couldve sworn i fixed the cymbals but oh well

ZOMG

I like it! I love the job you did on panning~
The sounds you used are amazing and nothing engulfs the other = smooth flow
I can tell what sounds you used.
The mix of the instruments is good
Awesome melody
AHHHHHHHHH :D LOVE IT.

N3IN responds:

Thank you :D

Haha nice!

I really like it because it really ambient in the beginning and the beat rolls in pretty smoothly. It gives a happy feel which I really like!
BTW: This song can fit in some mmorpgs like maplestory or Flyff LOL.

Zinitymusic responds:

thanks dude! this is what i made it for ! :)
and i would LOVE if the track would fit to a game! :'D !

subscribe me on youtube !! :'D
http://www.youtube.com/user/djzinity

Its good!

You're getting somewhere. The sound of the instruments you used are ok though sometimes they conflict because they get crowded, you can try stereo'ing them or panning them differently because I feel like the sounds are centered too much.
Good original song tho :D

ladyninjitsu responds:

that is great feedback. to be honest i didn't like the song and i didn't know what i was doing with it, so i sorta just gave up. i'll def listen to your advice!

I need...

A tissue to clean the jizz. finish. kthxbai. :D

DJ-Qwamii responds:

lol thanks xD

Ha! Very Close!

It sounds really close to Basshunter! If that's what you were trying to go for. Other than that, just go for making the song more fuller. It sounds empty at some parts.

liberatingpulse responds:

Haha, yeah you're definitely right on making it sound "fuller." I suppose I was a bit lazy on this song because I was making it as a joke, but I hope it made some people laugh!

I meant to press 5!

Even though it's a filler it's cool. It make you feel happy-go-lucky :D

The-Sir-Squ responds:

Thank you it's always nice to know someone like my work. That reminds me, I forgot to say this was another collaboration with my awesome music teacher I wort the lead and he helped me out with the rest especially the tuba which he has a really good ear for.

Amateur Music producer! Back after a really long time! Left my hard house (genre) and got into glitch, dubstep, complextro, trip hop; really any EDM genre!

Age 27, Male

Still in school!

New Jersey

Joined on 8/26/10

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